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You. by ~bluejade16:iconbluejade16:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


Your lips...
(Cold to touch)

Your heart...
(Never open)

My love...
(Never dying)

Your truth...
(Never tainted)

My will...
(Slowly slipping)
©2004-2008 ~bluejade16
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Submitted: Dec 22, 2004
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It's a bit experimental, but I like it. It's not really me too keep it so 'short' but anyway =P

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~Leviathon1880-1980:iconLeviathon1880-1980: Dec 22, 2004, 5:17:06 AM
Interesting concept

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"Once again; the serpent shall rise from the eternal sea."

---Leviathon

www.studio-obscura.net
~bluejade16:iconbluejade16: Dec 23, 2004, 10:44:30 PM
Gracias =)

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Let Me Complicate You...
~bluejade16:iconbluejade16: Dec 23, 2004, 10:45:35 PM
I'll take that Hmm as skeptical, and not a fan? :P Merry Chrissy for tomorrow too :aww:

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Let Me Complicate You...
~Leviathon1880-1980:iconLeviathon1880-1980: Dec 24, 2004, 10:07:18 AM
De nada...

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"Once again; the serpent shall rise from the eternal sea."

---Leviathon

www.studio-obscura.net
~yoriku:iconyoriku: Dec 24, 2004, 2:52:44 PM
No... wasn't skeptical... was more of a thought provocative hmm... o.o
:hug: Merry Christmas to you too
Matt :hug:
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